Sunday, January 15, 2012


At the desk nice and early (on a Sunday...I know...I must be mad!), let's see what I can get done.

First up: notes from the script editor on what I've written so far.

First point: He's worried one of the two main characters looks a little weak along side a secondary character who is very strong. I agree and will go back later and correct this.

Second point: He is worried the second half of the screenplay is becoming a little too talky and isn't visual enough. I also agree and it was a problem I've seen coming for a while. The second half of the screenplay takes place in a hospital and it's very easy to fall into the talky trap. But I've got to think big, think visual and come up with a different way of showing these scenes.

I had better get on with it.


Dominic Carver said...

I'm loving working on a Sunday morning.

The kids are being occupied by the dear lady wife, I've got my headphones on with Oasis playing, drowning out all distracting sounds, allowing me to concentrate on what I'm doing. Getting quite a bit done :-)

Dominic Carver said...

Lots done, some really good character stuff added. Very pleased.

Now to show my family I do actually exist and that I'm not actually a myth.