tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-23732661.post8069756737707620..comments2023-09-09T14:28:57.480+01:00Comments on The Scriptwriter: LOST SOUL Day 5Dominic Carverhttp://www.blogger.com/profile/10148603580719526847noreply@blogger.comBlogger5125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-23732661.post-68566070466346335212012-01-05T15:41:59.022+00:002012-01-05T15:41:59.022+00:00Phew, that really was hard going today. Another 5 ...Phew, that really was hard going today. Another 5 pages done, 26 in total, still one more than my accumulated target.<br /><br />In the end I cut between the two scenes I was having trouble with, dipping into one to reveal character or information, then into the other, then back to the first and so on.<br /><br />Again I solved a problem as I went along, this time how to reveal a secret a character was keeping from her son. Not the way I intended, but I think it works better.<br /><br />See you tomorrow.Dominic Carverhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/10148603580719526847noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-23732661.post-25566997592465415282012-01-05T15:09:32.936+00:002012-01-05T15:09:32.936+00:004 pages done... I had to go back and tidy up the r...4 pages done... I had to go back and tidy up the rubbish I wrote this morning. Still on track though.<br /><br />And I've spoken to two agents on the phone today as well.<br /><br />Got to collect the boy from nursery in a bit, let's see how much I can get done before then.Dominic Carverhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/10148603580719526847noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-23732661.post-68661184298238594382012-01-05T13:56:11.893+00:002012-01-05T13:56:11.893+00:00Jumping back and forth quite a bit between two sce...Jumping back and forth quite a bit between two scenes and now I have a baby with a tummy bug to contend with...still, I'm getting there.Dominic Carverhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/10148603580719526847noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-23732661.post-78172253373827704642012-01-05T11:22:11.351+00:002012-01-05T11:22:11.351+00:00Skipped ahead a little and now making better progr...Skipped ahead a little and now making better progress, will attempt to go back to the scenes that were causing me a problem later.Dominic Carverhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/10148603580719526847noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-23732661.post-8949002572407165042012-01-05T10:31:08.385+00:002012-01-05T10:31:08.385+00:00It's a real struggle today, the words just are...It's a real struggle today, the words just aren't flowing...MUST.WRITE. WORDS.NOW.Dominic Carverhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/10148603580719526847noreply@blogger.com